trying to use the forum for my own gains, or hey check out a movie im in.

[gojikranz]

we made a film for campus movie fest here it is

as much as i want to share my movie with you folks as i value your opinions i must confess i mainly post it here to ask anyone who has free texting to text
VOTE29 to 77506 so we can win the audience award and move onto hte regional finals in san francisco!  if not hope you enjoy was made in one day im the guy in the film in case you didnt guess.

oh and parental warning adult themes and language for those who are offended easily.

[anais.jude]

I liked that a whole lot! Some of the editing was irritating, though. I don't like the jump cuts like that.


and, as a girl who likes porn, i appreciate your film representin'   

[RVR II]

It's got potential..

Um... What more am I allowed to say??

[gojikranz]

you can say whatever you want i dont mind criticism.

[RVR II]

you can say whatever you want i dont mind criticism.

OK.. More T & A would've been nice

[gojikranz]

were i the director for sure unfortunately it was for a contest so i dont think the real thing was allowed.

[mrbasehart]

I thought overall it was pretty good.  It was funny in the places it needed to be, and I actually think the not showing of porn was a good idea.  That way, you can imagine the couple watching the most utterly depraved things of all time.   I think a better female lead would've benefitted the film though, she rushes through her lines too fast, and is a little too manic.  If the character was cool about the whole thing, it would've been funnier and a little more unsettling to the guy.  The first shot of the girl is too dark as well - you can't actually see that it's a cute girl - the reveal would've been better if it were clearer.  Finally, a small thing - why is she championing free porn, when she wants to pay $45 for a collection of it?

Nice job though, and certainly better than some of the "award-winning" short films I've seen on Youtube. 

[gojikranz]

ya we were having some issues with lighting there, one of the lights broke so we had to go with what we had.  such is what happens when you only have one day and no chance for retakes. 

i think shes just saying im a moron for not taking advantage of having the porn for free before i sell it.

[BBQ Platypus]

I liked it.  It was amusing - I've seen student films that were MUCH worse than this one.  I hereby declare this video to be "pretty good shit."

[Piobman]

Very good. Well done and funny.

[Tripe]

Yeah I thought it was pretty good and she's very cute*

*I mean that in the sense of "Adorably Quirky" but she's also pretty