login

Author Topic: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)  (Read 1586 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Johnny Unusual

  • The Efron
  • ****
  • Posts: 26063
  • Liked: 5118
  • Mr. Robot
My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« on: May 28, 2009, 08:05:02 PM »
My friend really deserves most of the credit for editing and such

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/ByV8ylZlNdE&amp;hl=en&amp;fs=1" target="_blank" class="new_win">http://www.youtube.com/v/ByV8ylZlNdE&amp;hl=en&amp;fs=1</a>

Comments, criticism?


Offline SJP

  • The FBI Pays Me to Surf
  • *
  • Posts: 2810
  • Liked: 199
  • Worst...avatar...ever!
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2009, 09:09:06 PM »
Okay, I'll start with criticism:

A few moments of dialogue overrun.  Nothing severe until the end, but it's there.

Now, for the constructive:

Holy crap.  I almost fell out of my chair.  I was going to list my favorite lines, but there's just too many.  Every narrator bit was solid gold.

Now I'm going to be saying "TEENAGE MUTHA!" for days.
One Man Band Riffs.  18 riffs, over 600 served, since 2009.


Offline CSAllen

  • Schnappi Supporter
  • ***
  • Posts: 158
  • Liked: 1
  • Cthulhu, take me now!
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 02:25:56 AM »
So Larry David started his career doing narration...


Offline Tripe

  • Stars in Musicals
  • *
  • Posts: 41553
  • Liked: 9932
  • Very dapper
    • Nick Rowley, Voice Artist
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 05:01:05 AM »
Yeah that was pretty good, is that it or is there more? :)


Offline Johnny Unusual

  • The Efron
  • ****
  • Posts: 26063
  • Liked: 5118
  • Mr. Robot
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 05:28:07 AM »
We just did the trailer.  Me and my firend are starting small. We're working on a seven minute short next, but we're hoping to do a full movie eventually.  Just sort of building up to it with larger and larger projects.

I found this trailer by accident once and we realized it's probably better to riff this than the movie, largely because the narrator sounds rather spiteful and misogynistic.

Also, does anyone think I sound like Lowtax?  I really dislike hearing my own voice.
« Last Edit: May 29, 2009, 05:35:04 AM by Johnny Unusual »


Offline MSTJedi

  • Climbed El Capitan
  • *******
  • Posts: 5037
  • Liked: 604
  • In a not too distant future far, far away. . . .
    • Facebook
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 06:40:48 AM »
That's really good! I fully endorse this product and will be looking for more soon.  :)



Offline Raven

  • Climbed El Capitan
  • *******
  • Posts: 5078
  • Liked: 177
  • Nevermore...
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 12:21:50 PM »
I watched it 3-4 times and "Part-time car matador"  cracks me up everytime.  I kinda wish this was a full length riff.


Offline torgosPizza

  • Administrator
  • *****
  • Posts: 7733
  • Liked: 247
  • Heaven is nowhere, just look to the stars.
    • RiffTrax
Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
« Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 01:19:44 PM »
Yeah, I have to agree. That was pretty damn funny. Your Brooklyn accent is dead-on, and the parts with the narrator were also my favorite. Looking forward to featuring you guys on the iRiffs page :)