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Title: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: Johnny Unusual on May 28, 2009, 08:05:02 PM
My friend really deserves most of the credit for editing and such

http://www.youtube.com/v/ByV8ylZlNdE&hl=en&fs=1

Comments, criticism?
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: SJP on May 28, 2009, 09:09:06 PM
Okay, I'll start with criticism:

A few moments of dialogue overrun.  Nothing severe until the end, but it's there.

Now, for the constructive:

Holy crap.  I almost fell out of my chair.  I was going to list my favorite lines, but there's just too many.  Every narrator bit was solid gold.

Now I'm going to be saying "TEENAGE MUTHA!" for days.
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: CSAllen on May 29, 2009, 02:25:56 AM
So Larry David started his career doing narration...
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: Tripe on May 29, 2009, 05:01:05 AM
Yeah that was pretty good, is that it or is there more? :)
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: Johnny Unusual on May 29, 2009, 05:28:07 AM
We just did the trailer.  Me and my firend are starting small. We're working on a seven minute short next, but we're hoping to do a full movie eventually.  Just sort of building up to it with larger and larger projects.

I found this trailer by accident once and we realized it's probably better to riff this than the movie, largely because the narrator sounds rather spiteful and misogynistic.

Also, does anyone think I sound like Lowtax?  I really dislike hearing my own voice.
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: MSTJedi on May 29, 2009, 06:40:48 AM
That's really good! I fully endorse this product and will be looking for more soon.  :)
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: Raven on May 29, 2009, 12:21:50 PM
I watched it 3-4 times and "Part-time car matador"  cracks me up everytime.  I kinda wish this was a full length riff.
Title: Re: My first riff (with a friend) (TEENAGE MUTHA!)
Post by: torgosPizza on May 29, 2009, 01:19:44 PM
Yeah, I have to agree. That was pretty damn funny. Your Brooklyn accent is dead-on, and the parts with the narrator were also my favorite. Looking forward to featuring you guys on the iRiffs page :)