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Title: Junior High riffcrap (need help)
Post by: jessemckinney on January 07, 2009, 11:56:43 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LREwHjrEtYw

Hello and how are you, I'm new here. I'm also very drunk. I made this thing where I talk over something old, as is the custom. It isn't finished, probably won't be. Tell me it sucks. Thanks!
Title: Re: Junior High riffcrap (need help)
Post by: Tripe on January 08, 2009, 05:06:11 AM
Aw it's not all that bad.
Title: Re: Junior High riffcrap (need help)
Post by: Action Batch on January 08, 2009, 05:47:06 AM
I thought it was funny. Biting. Satirical. But a suggestion. You need a riff partner. Your riffs are funny, but they seem unattached, like they lack focus. You need someone to bounce off of.
Title: Re: Junior High riffcrap (need help)
Post by: jessemckinney on January 08, 2009, 12:38:08 PM
Aw it's not all that bad.

It's hovering around D- territory :)
I'd thought about doing something like this every since yesterday, this was mostly a mic test thing before I do something actual, like Eraserhead. Trying to make fun of that one is like farting at a funeral though...but it's never been done.

I thought it was funny. Biting. Satirical. But a suggestion. You need a riff partner. Your riffs are funny, but they seem unattached, like they lack focus. You need someone to bounce off of.

Yeah, that's the breaks of being a weirdo loner, I'm afraid. Now that I made a proof of concept though, I might be able to get some of my more unemployed friends to jump in on something real. Thanks for the encouragement, more bitter and surly riffs to come.
Title: Re: Junior High riffcrap (need help)
Post by: Invisible NanoGhost on January 08, 2009, 12:50:15 PM
It wasn't bad.  You also did a decent job with the technical side of things.  I think you're putting it down way too much, perhaps as a defensive measure.  I'd give it more of a C to C+, if you had finished it.  No need to title it "riffshit", either.